one in the nill

[parch]

in my Buddha
I don't
do
exist
& in the suffering
there is no
thing
to cause or even
alleviate
so
in my memory
life
you
pictures
warmth
are all one in the nill
of space
time triumphant
& we become ghosts today
living tomorrow
without reason or cause

isn't it nice
to imagine the world
in a lollipop


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[Hannibal]

*scratches head* Alright, the lollipop thing threw me WAYYYYY off, which perhaps was your intent with that comment. *nods* up until there, I was following right along. It was a nice poem, sweet definatley in an odd sort of way. All your poetry evokes weird thoughts and emotions from me, I dont know why.

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[rose]

hmmmmmmmm...i dont quite understand how to read this. its a little baffeling.

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[machinery]

here it is again....just like coming back from Normal....and after Ian rolled that j...you started talking exist-non-exist jargon...and I was just like what what what...hehehe.....but I do dig it...do a certain extent...as of now, I think I do because I am reading Dharma Bums, which is very heavy in buddha and zen (u know this)...but as for the poem....threw me off with the last line....what was your idea behind this?

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[ranter]

i likied it ecuase it wasnt a ral poem, not many solid images and thoughts throughout, cept for the lollipop at the end, it shows you havent really made the full measure over yet, uh, but it shows growth, lots of growth from your earlier stuff, not so much just talking about a girl and lust and shit like...very imaginative....it reminds me of some of my earlier stuff, more mental stuff, but, now i am moving to things that you used to write about....its a total cyclical effect....hhphhhmmmmph....oh well and anyways and here i go rantin 'way

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[parch]

i hate the lollipop bit but i think i wrote it to add flavor to a poem which was too serious. the real point behind this poem is so big that in all reality.. it can only be contained in a laugh or look of wonder, disgust, amazement, bafflement, confusion... it can only be contained in a look. and if your face changed when you read that lollipop shit... to whatever it may have changed.... then that is good. cause that is it anyway. if you see. and if you don't. listen. that always helps.

haha

(i still hate that lollipop shit tho)